On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > Setting in critic mode: > Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? > Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? > Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it > might help. > This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D -- Ian Weller <ianweller@xxxxxxxxx> http://ianweller.org GnuPG fingerprint: E51E 0517 7A92 70A2 4226 B050 87ED 7C97 EFA8 4A36 "Technology is a word that describes something that doesn't work yet." ~ Douglas Adams
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