On Wed, 2009-03-04 at 16:18 -0600, Ian Weller wrote: > On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > > Setting in critic mode: > > Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? > > Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? > > Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it > > might help. > > > This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll > make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D Heh, are em dashes actually used in English? In Czech we use only hyphens, - (like in screen-cast), and en dashes, – (when separating sentences, denoting ranges, etc.)... Em dashes, —, seem over too long (to me) ;-) Although, for some reason my evolution displays both the en dash and em dash with same length (which is wrong)... Martin
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