Re: Picture Book Mockup

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Setting in critic mode:
Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph?
Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?
Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it
might help.

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Luya Tshimbalanga
Graphic & Web Design
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