Re: [CentOS-docs] initial page for 6.0 RN

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On 23 June 2011 18:02, Emmanuel Noobadmin <centos.admin@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 6/19/11, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> On 06/18/2011 10:47 PM, Cody Jackson wrote:
>>> Section 6.3:
>>> "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user we can use your help" sounds a
>>> bit like the release team is comprised of inexperienced CentOS users.
>>> It is, of course, not! Perhaps something like "Even as an
>>> inexperienced CentOS user, you can help the CentOS project!" would
>>> work better?
>> uhm. I'll leave that to people with more English knowledge than me. It
>> looks fine from where I stand.
>
> I'd second Cody on this, coming across that paragraph on the page, it
> makes CentOS devs the inexperienced users.

Thank you for the comment. I have made a note to examine that section
and adjust it, appropriately, in due course.

(Can anyone lend me a 30 hour day, please?)

Alan.
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