On 23 June 2011 18:02, Emmanuel Noobadmin <centos.admin@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On 6/19/11, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> On 06/18/2011 10:47 PM, Cody Jackson wrote: >>> Section 6.3: >>> "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user we can use your help" sounds a >>> bit like the release team is comprised of inexperienced CentOS users. >>> It is, of course, not! Perhaps something like "Even as an >>> inexperienced CentOS user, you can help the CentOS project!" would >>> work better? >> uhm. I'll leave that to people with more English knowledge than me. It >> looks fine from where I stand. > > I'd second Cody on this, coming across that paragraph on the page, it > makes CentOS devs the inexperienced users. Thank you for the comment. I have made a note to examine that section and adjust it, appropriately, in due course. (Can anyone lend me a 30 hour day, please?) Alan. _______________________________________________ CentOS-docs mailing list CentOS-docs@xxxxxxxxxx http://lists.centos.org/mailman/listinfo/centos-docs
