Re: [CentOS-docs] initial page for 6.0 RN

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On 6/19/11, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 06/18/2011 10:47 PM, Cody Jackson wrote:
>> Section 6.3:
>> "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user we can use your help" sounds a
>> bit like the release team is comprised of inexperienced CentOS users.
>> It is, of course, not! Perhaps something like "Even as an
>> inexperienced CentOS user, you can help the CentOS project!" would
>> work better?
> uhm. I'll leave that to people with more English knowledge than me. It
> looks fine from where I stand.

I'd second Cody on this, coming across that paragraph on the page, it
makes CentOS devs the inexperienced users.
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