Hi Link, Sorry about that! I'll certainly do what you suggest below :) Many thanks, James On Mon, 9 Jul 2018, 04:18 Link Dupont, <link@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Hi James, > > Thank you for your feedback, however, we generally don't make edits to > published articles except to correct inaccuracies. If you would like to > collaborate on future articles, feel free to join the IRC channel or > the weekly editorial meetings. Contributors are always welcome! > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Magazine > > Link > > On Sat, Jul 7, 2018 at 1:13 PM, James Thornber > <jamesthornber@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hi, > > > > Reads well, I think! :) I've made a few suggestions below, feel free > > to use > > if you think that they add to the article :) > > > > Perhaps change this: > > If you don't know it, open a Terminal (Applications > System Tools > > > Terminal) and type: > > > > To this: > > If you don't know how to do it, open a..... > > > > Consider changing this: > > This driver is suitable for any GPU found in 2010 and later. > > > > To: > > This driver is suitable for any GPU made since 2010 and later. > > > > Perhaps from (3 times in the article): > > Please remember to wait until the kmod get built earch time a new > > kernel > > rise up. > > > > To: > > Please remember to wait whilst the kmod gets rebuilt each time the > > workstation or server is rebooted. > > > > Hmm... Is it worth moving the secure boot section more towards the > > top of > > the article? It's a fairly big Show-Stopper - it's only a thought, as > > I'd > > hate for people to try to install the nvidia drivers to find > > themselves > > with a secure boot install! XD > > > > Best, > > > > James > > > > On Sat, 7 Jul 2018, 20:30 Link Dupont, <link@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > >> Hi Justice, > >> > >> I have made these changes to the article. Take a look at let me > >> know if > >> you notice anything else. > >> > >> Link > >> > >> On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM, justice del castillo > >> <justice@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> > Yep! And, I forgot to mention, we should probably change bullet 9 > >> to > >> > 8 as well. > >> > > >> > Also, if we could remove the ", with the fans facing down. If > >> there > >> > is no space for the fans to ventilate in this position, place the > >> > graphics card face up instead, if possible." part of > >> Installation's > >> > tenth bullet point, that would be great. > >> > > >> > Finally, if we could add a note saying "NOTE: this guide only > >> covers > >> > hardware installation for desktop computers, although the NVIDIA > >> > driver installation will be relevant for laptops as well." at the > >> > bottom of the preparation section, that would be much appreciated > >> as > >> > well. > >> > > >> > Thank you! > >> > jdc > >> > _______________________________________________ > >> > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> > To unsubscribe send an email to > >> magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > >> > List Guidelines: > >> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > >> > List Archives: > >> > > >> > >> > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/SGBT3OD32KWLDYXXMOUT3ESHEUVA5DM7/ > >> _______________________________________________ > >> Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> To unsubscribe send an email to > >> magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > >> List Guidelines: > >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > >> List Archives: > >> > >> > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/DENYKAUIFSZCGSX4BR7ECTYQK3IDK3MH/ > >> > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > > List Guidelines: > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > List Archives: > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/O2SIIZNTRMPTOXWY3NARTLFO6XJ3LTNO/ > > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/T5AXORXMRSSCXRMG2E7DZX2QBNKQGKQ4/
