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On Sat, Jul 7, 2018 at 1:13 PM, James Thornber
<jamesthornber@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi,
Reads well, I think! :) I've made a few suggestions below, feel free
to use
if you think that they add to the article :)
Perhaps change this:
If you don't know it, open a Terminal (Applications > System Tools >
Terminal) and type:
To this:
If you don't know how to do it, open a.....
Consider changing this:
This driver is suitable for any GPU found in 2010 and later.
To:
This driver is suitable for any GPU made since 2010 and later.
Perhaps from (3 times in the article):
Please remember to wait until the kmod get built earch time a new
kernel
rise up.
To:
Please remember to wait whilst the kmod gets rebuilt each time the
workstation or server is rebooted.
Hmm... Is it worth moving the secure boot section more towards the
top of
the article? It's a fairly big Show-Stopper - it's only a thought, as
I'd
hate for people to try to install the nvidia drivers to find
themselves
with a secure boot install! XD
Best,
James
On Sat, 7 Jul 2018, 20:30 Link Dupont, <link@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Justice,
I have made these changes to the article. Take a look at let me
know if
you notice anything else.
Link
On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM, justice del castillo
<justice@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Yep! And, I forgot to mention, we should probably change bullet 9
to
> 8 as well.
>
> Also, if we could remove the ", with the fans facing down. If
there
> is no space for the fans to ventilate in this position, place the
> graphics card face up instead, if possible." part of
Installation's
> tenth bullet point, that would be great.
>
> Finally, if we could add a note saying "NOTE: this guide only
covers
> hardware installation for desktop computers, although the NVIDIA
> driver installation will be relevant for laptops as well." at the
> bottom of the preparation section, that would be much appreciated
as
> well.
>
> Thank you!
> jdc
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