Hi, Reads well, I think! :) I've made a few suggestions below, feel free to use if you think that they add to the article :) Perhaps change this: If you don't know it, open a Terminal (Applications > System Tools > Terminal) and type: To this: If you don't know how to do it, open a..... Consider changing this: This driver is suitable for any GPU found in 2010 and later. To: This driver is suitable for any GPU made since 2010 and later. Perhaps from (3 times in the article): Please remember to wait until the kmod get built earch time a new kernel rise up. To: Please remember to wait whilst the kmod gets rebuilt each time the workstation or server is rebooted. Hmm... Is it worth moving the secure boot section more towards the top of the article? It's a fairly big Show-Stopper - it's only a thought, as I'd hate for people to try to install the nvidia drivers to find themselves with a secure boot install! XD Best, James On Sat, 7 Jul 2018, 20:30 Link Dupont, <link@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Hi Justice, > > I have made these changes to the article. Take a look at let me know if > you notice anything else. > > Link > > On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM, justice del castillo > <justice@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Yep! And, I forgot to mention, we should probably change bullet 9 to > > 8 as well. > > > > Also, if we could remove the ", with the fans facing down. If there > > is no space for the fans to ventilate in this position, place the > > graphics card face up instead, if possible." part of Installation's > > tenth bullet point, that would be great. > > > > Finally, if we could add a note saying "NOTE: this guide only covers > > hardware installation for desktop computers, although the NVIDIA > > driver installation will be relevant for laptops as well." at the > > bottom of the preparation section, that would be much appreciated as > > well. > > > > Thank you! > > jdc > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > > List Guidelines: > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > List Archives: > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/SGBT3OD32KWLDYXXMOUT3ESHEUVA5DM7/ > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/DENYKAUIFSZCGSX4BR7ECTYQK3IDK3MH/ > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/O2SIIZNTRMPTOXWY3NARTLFO6XJ3LTNO/
