Hi Justice,
I have made these changes to the article. Take a look at let me know if
you notice anything else.
Link
On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM, justice del castillo
<justice@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Yep! And, I forgot to mention, we should probably change bullet 9 to
8 as well.
Also, if we could remove the ", with the fans facing down. If there
is no space for the fans to ventilate in this position, place the
graphics card face up instead, if possible." part of Installation's
tenth bullet point, that would be great.
Finally, if we could add a note saying "NOTE: this guide only covers
hardware installation for desktop computers, although the NVIDIA
driver installation will be relevant for laptops as well." at the
bottom of the preparation section, that would be much appreciated as
well.
Thank you!
jdc
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