Thank you very much Mr Raby! Just give me the time to separate it in sections (so I will need to ad intros and outros for each block) and after that I will need a review. In the meantime, I will give you the access you required :) You just need to access the document in this URL https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing Then Google will allow you to ask for document access and I will receive a notification to give you the permissions. If you do that and you see I had not answered or allowed, please tell me because maybe the notification is lost in my inbox. Again thanks. P.D. Swear words in spanish are usually enough to be very communicative of your current mood :P P.D. 2: After trying to send this email again, google asked me to give automatic access to view the document to recipients, so maybe you will be able to see it after receiving this. On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 4:35 PM Dale Raby <daleraby@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Senor Gutierrez: > > I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic > issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is limited > to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days. > > I need permission to access your document though. > > Dale > > On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez@xxxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > > Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate > > them into more "atomic" pieces :) > > > > Thanks for reviewing! > > > > > > On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > > > > On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez@xxxxxxxxxx > > > > > wrote: > > > > > > > > Hi there. > > > > > > > > Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for > > > review. > > > > > > > > > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_ > > Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing > > > > > > > > Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English > > is > > > > not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most > > welcome. > > > > > > Hi Oliver, > > > > > > There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too > > > long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it > > > might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you > > > consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like > > > this: > > > > > > * What is FC and how do you install it? > > > * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile > > > > > > -- > > > Paul > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@ > > lists.fedoraproject.org/message/7DXFRUSQMU3UQCVXLUE67ZZBKPWXPYFX/ > > > > > > -- > > > > *Buy my books! The Wives of Jacob, Book I, In the Beginning, The > Post-Apocalyptic Blacksmith, 777 Bon Mots for Gunslingers and Other Real > Men, available at most on-line booksellers in multiple formats.Note: The > People of Jacb, Book II, In the Middle is currently being copy-editedand > should be out soon. Just Google my name for a complete list of my work.* > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/MY2KH76POZTSXMJCCRB2XZDVMPFM2YMI/ > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/3NFCEDHIJ7UTSE2QLK5GHVRKVWVR44TS/
