On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hi there. > > Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for review. > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing > > Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English is > not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most welcome. Hi Oliver, There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like this: * What is FC and how do you install it? * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile -- Paul _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/TYC5W6X2KOQKPLZ46VS2YTW3IS5NVMJ4/
