Senor Gutierrez: I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is limited to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days. I need permission to access your document though. Dale On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate > them into more "atomic" pieces :) > > Thanks for reviewing! > > > On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez@xxxxxxxxxx> > > wrote: > > > > > > Hi there. > > > > > > Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for > > review. > > > > > > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_ > Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing > > > > > > Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English > is > > > not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most > welcome. > > > > Hi Oliver, > > > > There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too > > long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it > > might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you > > consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like > > this: > > > > * What is FC and how do you install it? > > * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile > > > > -- > > Paul > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@ > lists.fedoraproject.org/message/7DXFRUSQMU3UQCVXLUE67ZZBKPWXPYFX/ > -- *Buy my books! The Wives of Jacob, Book I, In the Beginning, The Post-Apocalyptic Blacksmith, 777 Bon Mots for Gunslingers and Other Real Men, available at most on-line booksellers in multiple formats.Note: The People of Jacb, Book II, In the Middle is currently being copy-editedand should be out soon. Just Google my name for a complete list of my work.* _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/MY2KH76POZTSXMJCCRB2XZDVMPFM2YMI/
