Hi, Is there a way to see the original article? I don't remember what exactly said, I do remember it was meant to be a series and that it had more stuff but not exactly what or how. Cheers,Sylvia On Sun, 2017-02-05 at 00:18 +0000, Corey W Sheldon wrote: > Paul Frields: > > The original article beforeediting didn't have any direct hints > > about > > specific utilities, commands to run, etc. So I tried to keep the > > same > > sense around the article that Sylvia, the original author, > > intended. > > In some cases, there were two separate and distinct tips combined > > into > > one, so I separated them for clarity. I also tried to order them in > > terms of "depth" for where they took the user. > > > > I did look at the revisions Corey saved. Those revisions were light > > and didn't alter that general feel. I didn't see anything in those > > revisions that mentioned specific tools or commands. Perhaps > > there's > > an unsaved copy that didn't make it into the Wordpress instance? > > > > I would agree with Eduard and Link the article is fairly general. I > > tried to clarify what was there, put it in an order that would make > > as > > much sense to the reader as possible, make it concise for the > > typical > > modern reader (as well as international/ESL audiences), and keep > > the > > sense of the original author's work. > > > > Paul > > > > > > On Sat, Feb 4, 2017 at 4:26 PM, Eduard Lucena <eduardlucena@gmail.c > > om> wrote: > > > Hi team, > > > > > > Maybe I'm out of scope here, but I need to agreed with Link: How > > > is this > > > related with Fedora or any open source or free software? An > > > article about > > > scurity tips isn't good just because it has the word cryptography > > > on it. > > > The tips given are just superficial, it doesn't have anything > > > specific > > > about a browser or any software, how something differs from one > > > to another, > > > when something is mentioned, it doesn't say how to do it. I think > > > the > > > article need more work, no just editing, but more content. > > > > > > Br, > > > > > > 2017-02-04 2:16 GMT-03:00 Link Dupont <link@xxxxxxxxxxx>: > > > > > > > On Sat, 2017-02-04 at 03:06 +0000, Corey W Sheldon wrote: > > > > > it ACTUALLY mentioned how and what tools to use to do these > > > > > things? > > > > > > > > I agree with Corey here. The better articles we publish are the > > > > ones > > > > that instruct *how* to do something (think of the GnuPG > > > > series). The > > > > GnuPG articles were salient enough that they could be used as a > > > > guide > > > > on setting up a GPG key and securing your email with it. > > > > > > > > This article doesn't offer any lasting value to the reader. How > > > > does > > > > this relate to Fedora? Maybe a better spin on this would be > > > > "Making > > > > Fedora more secure"? Or "Securing Fedora for use in a public > > > > setting"? > > > > > > > > ~link > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > g > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproj > > > > ect.org > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > Eduard Lucena > > > Móvil: +56962318010 > > > GNU/Linux User #589060 > > > Ubuntu User #8749 > > > Fedora Ambassador Latam > > > _______________________________________________ > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraprojec > > > t.org > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject. > > org > > > > Paul, > > This article was dead in the water for 5 months and was originally > meant > as a series, yet I try to revive it and it's an idea that is washed, > claiming no scope for a series and no author, yet I've volunteered to > take it up. And as to scope the initial was the ideas, article 2 > would > be a deeper dive into how to do those things and article 3 a exercise > for the reader on additional suggested tactics/readings. BUT.. seeing > as > this was totally glossed over and the emphasis has clearly gone to > shorter SEO blessed articles over actual meaningful content, I am > done > bothering. Those wishing to see such are welcome to visit my blog. > > Regards, > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > g _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx