On 10/04/2016 10:08 AM, charles profitt wrote:
Paul: Thanks for the feedback. I did some more editing -- added a video (youtube) and information on where to get instructions on how to play the game. I changed the article to pending review. https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=57367d1000 Charles
Hey Charles! We took another look at this one during the meeting as well. With the previous mentioned feedback, seems great! Ryan is going to take this one for any final editing and schedule it for Friday, October 14, 2016.
Thanks for putting this together!
---- On Tue, 04 Oct 2016 05:55:04 -0700 Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote ---- > On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote: > > Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking > > for to help drive some traffic to the magazine. > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24 > > This is just fine for a short how-to article. I did some light > editing. But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling > users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the > reader how to find those in the game itself to get started. No need > to explain all the rules in this article, though. >
-- Cheers, Justin W. Flory jflory7@xxxxxxxxx
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