On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote: > Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking > for to help drive some traffic to the magazine. > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24 This is just fine for a short how-to article. I did some light editing. But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the reader how to find those in the game itself to get started. No need to explain all the rules in this article, though. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
