Paul: Thanks for the feedback. I did some more editing -- added a video (youtube) and information on where to get instructions on how to play the game. I changed the article to pending review. https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=57367d1000 Charles ---- On Tue, 04 Oct 2016 05:55:04 -0700 Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote ---- > On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote: > > Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking > > for to help drive some traffic to the magazine. > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24 > > This is just fine for a short how-to article. I did some light > editing. But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling > users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the > reader how to find those in the game itself to get started. No need > to explain all the rules in this article, though. > > -- > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
