On 04/17/2017 10:52 AM, Bill Nottingham wrote: > Practical: > "lights up" reads as very jargon-y to me. Maybe "... platform > to power hardware, clouds, and containers that enables software..." I also had an issue with "lights up" - sounds like jargon-y slang or just awkward / silly (was the first thing that stood out to me.) Agreed that some form of "enable" is a good swap-in for "lights up." ~m _______________________________________________ council-discuss mailing list -- council-discuss@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to council-discuss-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
