On 2010/06/11 18:15, Internet-Drafts@xxxxxxxx wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation Proposal Investigation Working Group of the IETF.
Title : Best Current Practices for NAT Traversal for Client-Server SIP
Nitpicks: page 1, paragraph 1:
"it's" -> "its"
"such as Real Time Protocol" -> "such as the Real-time Transport Protocol"
Page 5, 1st paragraph under Figure 1:
"The first is when using a reliable, connection orientated transport
protocol such as TCP, SIP has an inherent mechanism ..." rewrite as:
"The first is that when SIP uses a reliable, connection orientated
transport protocol such as TCP, it has an inherent mechanism ...
I'll read more later today and find more nits should they exist :)
frank
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