Re: [Sipping] I-D Action:draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-13.txt

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On 2010/06/12 10:55, Frank Shearar wrote:
On 2010/06/11 18:15, Internet-Drafts@xxxxxxxx wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation Proposal
Investigation Working Group of the IETF.


Title : Best Current Practices for NAT Traversal for Client-Server SIP


I'll read more later today and find more nits should they exist :)

Last paragraph of page 15: "This exonerates the need..." should be "This removes the need..." (To exonerate someone is to find them not guilty of some charges.)

Page 22 point 2 says

   2.  Secondly, the contact inserted contains to ensure that all new
       requests will be sent to the same flow.  Alternatively, a GRUU
       might have been used.  See 4.3/[RFC5626].

"the contact inserted contains" what? 'the "ob"' parameter'?

Page 23, message (3) isn't indented, where most (all?) of the other messages are indented 3 spaces.

frank
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