In a message dated 4/10/2017 1:57:19 P.M. Eastern Daylight Time,
randyslittle@xxxxxxxxx writes:
Dan
To much other information in the frame to know what to
really focus on. Nothing seems to be the subject. Bright
orange/yellow thing draw attention out of frame.
Randy, The bright yellow thing
draws me into the picture to the old machines in the middle and the rippled
old roof section draws me out. I wonder if this means I look at pictures like
I'm reading --from the left side to
the right side?
Roy
I don't know its just not my thing. Don't get it. No
clear subject of image.
Randy, I'm just playing with
colors and color schemes, sorta art for art's sake or color for color
sake. I have strayed pretty far from traditional
photography.
John,
Needs the rest of the story or something but
it doesn't seem to hold its own as a single image.
Randy, I think you need to
bring some context with you to get this picture. Reminds me of
existential cartoon character from the '60. You might just be too young to
appreciate this. To me this is the best of this set of
pictures.
Chris
It
was.
Jim
Looks like you went overboard with the clarity slider.
Don't thing it needs to be this crunchy. That's just my taste
though.
Randy, This was shot at iso
3200 on a "35 half frame camera" so I think the crunchiness is a
function of the capture and what ever Jim did to make it look
sharper.
Tina
out of focus?
Its like
John's its a picture needs the rest of the VISUAL story. It's disjointed
from its context.
Gelman
needs a black frame to help it
feel like it has more separation. Online it feels flat and to soft for my
taste.
Randy, I agree. A bigger print
with more sharpenss is needed. The black frame is a good
idea.
Roy
