Those tablecloth are NOT obtrusive ! It is OK as it is ! do nothing and don't be worried about. Pini Vollach 6 Tsivoni Haifa 34651 Israel -----Original Message----- From: owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Kenneth Frazier Sent: Sunday, May 29, 2011 1:50 PM To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students Subject: Re: Feedback on first submission On May 28, 2011, at 7:42 PM, YGelmanPhoto wrote: > All I would wish for in this shot is a hint of a smile on her face with some of it glinting in her eyes. And just maybe a bit more structure in the facial lighting, but that's not really very necessary. > > Anyway, I like it. Thanks for the comments, Yoram, There are several things about the photo that I wanted to preserve, primarily the open space and the dimensions. But that meant leaving in the area with the white tablecloth, which is a distraction. John's suggestion was to go for the head shot, and that is attractive. Another suggestion, from a friend, was to burn in the tablecloth and make it less obtrusive. Again, thanks, Ken ---------------------------- Ken Frazier kennybod@xxxxxxx
