Darin, I too loved the group of images in this gallery. I have been traveling and did not get a chance to comment. Thank you so much for your detailed comments and especially your assessment of "Carnation Montage". Rene -----Original Message----- From: owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Darin Heinz Sent: Friday, September 21, 2007 2:39 PM To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students Subject: Re: PF exhibit 09-15-07 Hi everyone. Overall, I'm pleased with this week's Gallery. I apologize for getting this out so late in the week. Without further ado, here we go! ----- ------- ----- "Carnation Montage" by Rene M Hales Rene, I can appreciate the triptych effect; the order of, and spacing between, images is probably ideal. The use of ragged edges gives it a film feel, but I think the level of haloing evident in the center image should be mimicked in the other two (they're a little too sharp for the feel I think you're going for). The water line in the center image looks a bit too high, and it makes the arrangement just a bit too symmetrical. Besides these minor issues, everything else looks good; exposure appears to be right down the line, and the overall image is very well done. ----- ------- -----
