Gary Perdue Two birds - or Hey that's my foot you're gnawing on! Nice avian interlude - a little tweaking of the colors with levels would deepen the colors and bring out more feather detail in the white parts, too. I like the focus - the important parts , ah.. the focal point, are sharp. Jim Snarski Lavender - this lovely image, too, would benefit from some tweaking with levels making the colors even more striking. Good detail in the bee's (wasp?) head. Per Ofverbeck Boy, am I fed up with football... cute title - he looks none too thrilled with playing ball. Good color and love the framing with all the lush grass around this bored hound. Emily L. Ferguson Beach towel - all the vertical lines interrupted by the diagonal railing and the black dog make for great compositon. Fantastic colors... you got it all right and show that you have a great eye. Well, thanks to all the contributors and the staff at RIT for sharing this with us and letting us voice our humble opinions. Have a good weekend all, Renate On 7/15/06, Charles Dias <deepblue972000@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Gary Perdue - Nice shot of the araras (it's the name of these birds here in Brazil ... arara). I like the vertical composition. Nice moment you captured. I thing the image need some sharpening work and a little bit more constrast and color saturation. Jim Snarski - Interesting shot. Nice composition and good background. I just don't like the light, it's too harsh. Per Ofverbeck - I hope this dog plays soccer fair than Zidane in the Soccer World Cup finals (he hit this head violently on the chest of an adversary player after a discussion). Nice shot. I like the grass background. I just miss to see the dog's eye. I think a fill in flash here would be nice. Emily L. Ferguson - Humm, interesting approuch for the scene. I like the colored towel side by side the white wood stairs but I think a wide angle lens would be better in showing a little more the sorrounding in order to allow the viewer to interprets better the image. Charles
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