Comments on AUG 06, 05 photographs

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Emily L. Ferguson - Nautor Swan 45 in Narragansett Bay
Great action shot although as others mentioned there are some nits ... like 
crop too close to right hand side and looks like on of the girls is about to
throw up. Interesting that they seem so close to shore. With the keel this
sailboat must have that is somewhat precarious, no? This is one time that a
look from behind seems to work. 

Bob Talbot- Outhouse
Very pleasing in spite of large expanse of sky on the right. First time I have
seen a two story outhouse. 

Jim Davis - Surf Casting Lesson
Hmmmm .... I see the aprehesnion in the kid's face and the enthusiasm in the
dad's face. The black object punching him in the groin is a visual detractor
for me. 

Howard Leigh - Exhausted
Cool but scary and uncomfortable to look at. But well executed in my opinion.

Jim Snarski - Fledgling
Nice photograph of a fleeting time in the bird's and our lives. Somehow the
bird is lacking a bit of "character" - I am not sure how to achieve that myself
or what to recommend.

Christopher Strevens - Beggar Girl
I basically like this as a composition of colors and textures. The effect near
her face is not too great - maybe it would have been better if we could still
see her - I understand you were trying to hide her identity. The flute might be
better sharp right to her lips.

cheerio,
andy




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