Only fair if I ask for feedback to take the
time to give some... I assume I can be honest here without anyone taking
personal offense.
My work can be found here:
Dean
Ernest: Great
illustration. Just a bit static. I'd Photoshop a bit more blur in the car
or cyclist to show motion.
Fraser: I don't know
what I'm looking at. Some abstract photography allows one to form their own
interpretations but this just bores me without knowing what the subject is or
having a frame of reference.
Qkano: Nice mood but sun
is too centered. Rule of thirds applies here.
Mair: Well done. I
especially like the human element with the footprints in the snow. Lovely pastel
blues.
Mason: Good eye. I would submit
these to the museum to see if they want to sell cards or posters. Or to the
Hauser estate. Best shot I've ever seen of Hauser's work and I've lived in Santa
Fe and seen many photos of his work.
Marsh: Good technical
shot. You would go crazy at the Tucson Gem and Mineral Show which is here now.
Tons of the best fossils in the world on display.
Ferguson: As part of a series this
might fit but I don't think it is interesting enough to stand on its own. I
would have placed figures in the windows to give it some subject or something.
Maybe a woman at the top looking down on two men looking up at her or something.
Bobke: I like the hue and
the mood. Good marketable stock photo if you are so inclined.
Small: To be fair I've never been much
interested in street photography unless the people shown are intriguing or
bizarre in some way. This guy just IS.
Cunningham: Oooh I love the mood of
this! And the graininess. Even looks a bit surreal with the hat.
Spurlock: Well done! Most
interesting is the American Flag bandanna. That you went to Hell and back to
make these is admirable too.
Vissak: If you are
shooting this as an ecologist to document what happened I think it is an
excellent illustration. However for anything else it just seems to be a tangle
of wood. For this I think the audience is key for its value. I wouldn't hang it
on a wall but for environmental studies it may be very valuable.
Dalrymple: A good example
of the effects of different filters for a Photoshop tutorial or something. I do
like the wash of colors though. These look like someone just playing around with
Photoshop filters to me.
