Thank for your comments. Very constructive. -----Original Message----- From: owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Qkano Sent: 27 November 2004 18:37 To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students Subject: PF Exhibits on 2004-11-27 : Chris's shot Christopher Strevens - Snow on Reigate Hill 20-11-2004 Overall I like this: I can certainly see why it was taken. I like the mood that comes from the low light and the mist. If it has some "I wish" points though there are three ... 1) the window is bright, and indeed a good counterpoint to the gloom outdoors but ... I wish it was not cut in two. 2) the girl with the ubmrella was half a second early: I whsi she was not partially eclipsed by the notice board. 3) the picture looks tilted ... which exaggerates the lean of the lrft-most tree. I've done a few tweaks to show what I mean ... http://website.lineone.net/~wildimages/PF/strevens-3.jpg Bob
