Judy, Thanks for taking the effort to let me know what you see. I tried a couple of your suggestions. It's always good to try what someone else ideas. Thanks, Bill Ellis wb9cac@comcast.net ----- Original Message ----- From: "Judy Ng" <roosterwok03@yahoo.com> To: "List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students" <photoforum@listserver.isc.rit.edu> Sent: Monday, December 22, 2003 5:39 PM Subject: PF List Exhibits 12-20-03 Review > My first review, 'minder that these are all critique > opinions not criticisms. Bill Ellis > The preponderence of lines here is great. Vertical > building and angled platform/wires = straight/diagonal > lines all over the place. The contrast gives me > posterized/solarized vibes, which also works for me. > Perhaps crop that last left platform holder on the far > left, give a little more space to the right side, and > lighten the last figure (and surrounding area) on the > left from platform roof to floor. Also a little more > burn on the window behind the second figure from the > right? > > Thanks for posting images! > Judy > > __________________________________ > Do you Yahoo!? > Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail AddressGuard > http://antispam.yahoo.com/whatsnewfree >