David Small: Over all I like your work. This one also has good
composition. The subject is self explanatory, although a little more
gradation might add some depth.
Hi Shyrell. You did a fine job on your first review. Keep them coming. You are absolutely right about the gradation. Although most of my shots have very little cropping,this one was heavily cropped to get the composition I wanted,and it lost some of the gradation of tone.
Dave Small
