RE: Gallery comments - 28/04/2003

["Alan P. Hayes" <ahayes@berkshire.rr.com>]

I think maybe its the extent of the rail, and the dark gray floor 
that it really hurts to lose. I wouldn't crop it. Personally, the 
dark thing didn't bother me, but I tend not to object to imperfect 
realities in photos that seem to bother a lot of people.

At 0:47 +0200 5/1/03, Pinimage wrote:
> Thomas wrote:" I would have cut away the dark thing
> in lower left corner "
> Do everyone think he is right ?
> Isn't this thing take you back to reality and make your eye travel along the
> frame ?
>
> Pini
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> Pini Vollach
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> Pini Vollach - :
> Nice abstraction, pure, clean form. I would have cut away the dark thing
> in lower left corner by cropping maybe 5% from below. Or maybe you could
> have shot from slightly lower to eliminate it and make the low white
> wall touch the corner of the picture.


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