Re: [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough

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在 2021/3/4 下午3:40, Wu X.C. 写道:
> On Thu, Mar 04, 2021 at 03:23:43PM +0800, Alex Shi wrote:
>>
>>
>> 在 2021/2/28 下午1:40, Wu XiangCheng 写道:
>>> Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
>>>
>>> Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@xxxxxxxx>
>>> ---
>>>  .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst         | 141 +++++++++---------
>>>  1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-)
>>>
>>> diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
>>> index f509e077e1cb..c5442c356dad 100644
>>> --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
>>> +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
>>> @@ -1,145 +1,152 @@
>>>  .. include:: ../disclaimer-zh_CN.rst
>>>  
>>>  :Original: :ref:`Documentation/process/6.Followthrough.rst <development_followthrough>`
>>> -:Translator: Alex Shi <alex.shi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>>> +
>>> +:Translator:
>>> +
>>> + 时奎亮 Alex Shi <alex.shi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>>> +
>>> +:校译:
>>> +
>>> + 吴想成 Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@xxxxxxxx>
>>>  
>>>  .. _cn_development_followthrough:
>>>  
>>>  跟进
>>>  ====
>>>  
>>> -在这一点上,您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针,并且,随着您自己的工程技能
>>> +此时,您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针,并且,随着您自己的工程技能
>>
>> Seems there are many lines shorter than before, this may make new
>> doc are bit more ugly and cause reader uncomfort, consider your change
>> may widerly used or reference for long time. Line width control is
>> very meanignful and valuable things.
>>
>> Would you like try to refill all shorter lines, make context more
>> pretty?
>>
> OK, good suggestion.
> I'll try to fill the shorter lines or return at a word or punctuation.
> But I won't fill a modified single line in a large paragraph, that may
> cause many unnecessary line changes.

Uh, it still worth to do ...

> 
> Thanks
> Wu X.C.
> 



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