Re: [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough

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On Thu, Mar 04, 2021 at 03:23:43PM +0800, Alex Shi wrote:
> 
> 
> 在 2021/2/28 下午1:40, Wu XiangCheng 写道:
> > Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@xxxxxxxx>
> > ---
> >  .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst         | 141 +++++++++---------
> >  1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > index f509e077e1cb..c5442c356dad 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
> > @@ -1,145 +1,152 @@
> >  .. include:: ../disclaimer-zh_CN.rst
> >  
> >  :Original: :ref:`Documentation/process/6.Followthrough.rst <development_followthrough>`
> > -:Translator: Alex Shi <alex.shi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> > +
> > +:Translator:
> > +
> > + 时奎亮 Alex Shi <alex.shi@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> > +
> > +:校译:
> > +
> > + 吴想成 Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@xxxxxxxx>
> >  
> >  .. _cn_development_followthrough:
> >  
> >  跟进
> >  ====
> >  
> > -在这一点上,您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针,并且,随着您自己的工程技能
> > +此时,您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针,并且,随着您自己的工程技能
> 
> Seems there are many lines shorter than before, this may make new
> doc are bit more ugly and cause reader uncomfort, consider your change
> may widerly used or reference for long time. Line width control is
> very meanignful and valuable things.
> 
> Would you like try to refill all shorter lines, make context more
> pretty?
>
OK, good suggestion.
I'll try to fill the shorter lines or return at a word or punctuation.
But I won't fill a modified single line in a large paragraph, that may
cause many unnecessary line changes.

Thanks
Wu X.C.




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