On Mon, Feb 16, 2009 at 12:43 PM, Roger E <gurusonic@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > Viktor Mastoridis wrote: >> >> The colour of voice is very nice. But try to record the voice in as much >> as possible equal loudness - before you move to dynamics. Fill the channel >> with iit. . Use compressor on the vocals as well - will help you get over >> the beginner's problems with loudness. >> >> The rhythms guitar should be more tight - as you don't have bass/drums, >> the rhythm guitar serves as the basis of this song, so it HAS to be rock >> solid. Again, this is true before you learn to move slightly in time for the >> effect of it. >> >> All in all the song is quite good - but you are not convinced in it. Try >> to sing it as if you were sure that it will sell 100.000 copies - the >> results will be amazing. One song reflects one own's confidence - or the >> lack of it. "Losing My Religion" is so beautifully unconfident - and that's >> the big asset of it. But your song needs confidence, actually. >> >> I hope this helps, >> >> Viktor >> >> 2009/2/16 Loki Davison <loki.davison@xxxxxxxxx >> <mailto:loki.davison@xxxxxxxxx>> >> >> HI all, >> despite the technical difficulties outlined in the other email some >> recording did occur. It's a cheesy love song inspired by recent >> events, some lyrics hopeful/prophetic/fictitious ;) Please tell me >> what you think. I really need singing lessons.... >> >> Same idea but in instrumental and vocal forms: >> >> http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/~loki/scarlet_hair_novocals.mp3 >> <http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/%7Eloki/scarlet_hair_novocals.mp3> >> >> http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/~loki/scarlet_hair.mp3 >> <http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/%7Eloki/scarlet_hair.mp3> >> >> Instruments: acoustic guitar, electric bass and tambourine. >> >> Hope it's ok, >> Loki >> >> > I like it and agree with Viktor's comments. Push it, man, push it. > Thanks, enlightening comment about confidence coming across. Some thing i'll see if i can work on for the next track. I tried recording with drums from hydrogen but then found my guitar section to be far too tight/boring ;) Any hints on keeping a good rhythm when playing with a click? Focus on dynamics more? Loki _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user