Viktor Mastoridis wrote: > The colour of voice is very nice. But try to record the voice in as > much as possible equal loudness - before you move to dynamics. Fill > the channel with iit. . Use compressor on the vocals as well - will > help you get over the beginner's problems with loudness. > > The rhythms guitar should be more tight - as you don't have > bass/drums, the rhythm guitar serves as the basis of this song, so it > HAS to be rock solid. Again, this is true before you learn to move > slightly in time for the effect of it. > > All in all the song is quite good - but you are not convinced in it. > Try to sing it as if you were sure that it will sell 100.000 copies - > the results will be amazing. One song reflects one own's confidence - > or the lack of it. "Losing My Religion" is so beautifully unconfident > - and that's the big asset of it. But your song needs confidence, > actually. > > I hope this helps, > > Viktor > > 2009/2/16 Loki Davison <loki.davison@xxxxxxxxx > <mailto:loki.davison@xxxxxxxxx>> > > HI all, > despite the technical difficulties outlined in the other email some > recording did occur. It's a cheesy love song inspired by recent > events, some lyrics hopeful/prophetic/fictitious ;) Please tell me > what you think. I really need singing lessons.... > > Same idea but in instrumental and vocal forms: > > http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/~loki/scarlet_hair_novocals.mp3 > <http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/%7Eloki/scarlet_hair_novocals.mp3> > > http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/~loki/scarlet_hair.mp3 > <http://yoyo.its.monash.edu.au/%7Eloki/scarlet_hair.mp3> > > Instruments: acoustic guitar, electric bass and tambourine. > > Hope it's ok, > Loki > > I like it and agree with Viktor's comments. Push it, man, push it. _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user
