Jan Depner <eviltwin69@xxxxxxxxxxxx>, on Sat May 27, 2006 [12:40:59 PM] said: > here as well ;-) I agree with Patrick on the vocals. It seems to me > that the singer is afraid of her own voice. I have recorded some of my Hi; I really like this song, and I have to agree the singer seems to be repressed, but its perfect for this melody. Maybe if I understood the lyrics Id think different, but the whole song feels sad and repressed like communist east europe or something;) The only part I dont like is where the singer speaks a word. It throws off the lyrical aspect. She should remain plaintive. Paul set@xxxxxxxxx > son's friends bands and almost without exception the "singers" think > that falsetto is their normal singing voice. I usually have to run all > of the rest of the band out and spend a few hours getting them to loosen > up and really sing. It sounds to me like the singer in Firelightless > has a decent voice, she's just got to go ahead and belt it out. If > you're striving for that soft vocal sound you can do it with mic > placement and/or volume and effects instead of having her sing falsetto. > I don't feel that you lost the timing in the center, it just gets a bit > more understated. You're still on tempo. Other than the vocals I think > it's a great song. I like everything else about it. > > > > -- > Jan 'Evil Twin' Depner > The Fuzzy Dice > http://myweb.cableone.net/eviltwin69/fuzzy.html