Thanks for the review! On Mar 1, 2020, at 11:27 AM, Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review result: Has Nits > > I found the document ready for publication as an Informational RFC. > > I do have a couple of minor editorial nits: > 1) Abstract does not mention this document updates RFC 7706. As another reviewer pointed out, this draft actually obsoletes RFC 7706. But still, the Abstract needs to say that. Fixed in the next draft. > 2) Since use of AXFR and NOTIFY is mentioned and actually seems to be assumed > in multiple places in the draft I would add an appropriate reference to RFC > 5936. Yep. Fixed. > 3) The draft has multiple IP address and domain name examples that are > not according to reserved IP addresses or domain names for documentation. > However, due to nature of this document it might be OK to keep the IP addresses > and domain names as they are now in the draft. We believe so, yes. --Paul Hoffman
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