Thanks for this small document that clearly states how Trustees are
appointed and is an important cog.
Just a couple of comments, and some nits.
Best,
Adrian
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Not sure whether this is just a matter of variations of language over
the Atlantic, but "update to the selection" means (to me) changing the
people who have been selected. So, better to say "update to the process
for selection."
Thus...
Title
OLD
Update to the Selection of Trustees for the IETF Trust
NEW
Update to the Process for Selection of Trustees for the IETF Trust
Abstract
OLD
This memo updates the selection of trustees for the IETF Trust.
NEW
This memo updates the process for selection of trustees for the IETF
Trust.
Introduction
OLD
This memo updates the selection of trustees for the IETF Trust.
NEW
This memo updates the process for selection of trustees for the IETF
Trust.
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Section 2
IETF rules regarding recalls and other NomCom-related processes
continue to apply [RFC7437].
Pedantic, but you can't quite get away with this because the NomCom
processes in 7437 did not apply to pure IETF Trust appointments.
How about...
The processes regarding NomCom appointments and recalls of Trustees
for the IETF Trust follow those described in [RFC7437].
Does this mean this document updates 7437?
=== Nits
Abstract and Introduction
s/trustees but/trustees, but/
> The IESG has received a request from the IETF Administrative Support Activity
> 2 WG (iasa2) to consider the following document: - 'Update to the Selection
> of Trustees for the IETF Trust'
> <draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00.txt> as Best Current Practice
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
> comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
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