Adrian, Many thanks for your perceptive review. I have adopted your suggestions in my copy of the draft. One follow-up below: > Section 2 > > IETF rules regarding recalls and other NomCom-related processes > continue to apply [RFC7437]. > > Pedantic, but you can't quite get away with this because the NomCom > processes in 7437 did not apply to pure IETF Trust appointments. > > How about... > > The processes regarding NomCom appointments and recalls of Trustees > for the IETF Trust follow those described in [RFC7437]. That’s much better, and this was an important catch. > Does this mean this document updates 7437? I think not, because this document uses 7437… would be happy to hear if people think otherwise. Jari
