Joel Halpern <jmh@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Does section 3.3.2 intend to mandate that devices have persistent > storage for the LDevID? Or is it trying to say that on power cycle it > stays in Enrolled state if it retains its LDevID, but goes back to the > Factory default state if not? (Given that folks have repeatedly said > that these may be low power devices, I think we need to be clear about > what we are requiring.) *) Constrained devices are not, in general, in scope for the WG *) Regardless, the LDevID needs to be persisted, and I agree we should say that. > Section 5 starts by saying that the administrator does not have to > configure security. In the very next paragraph it says that a PKI must > be in place. That clearly requires configuring some security > properties. Please reword. The administrator has to have a PKI. We considered making the PKI auto-configuring, but we backed out of that as a hard requirement. I agree that this text need to be clarified. > Section 3.3.2 in defining when a device is in the Enrolled state > says that it in the Enrolled state if it has an LDevID. As far as I > can tell, the added constraint is that it is not currently a member of > an ACP. The text should include that. Agreed. > The third paragraph of section 6.1 refers to the Autonomic nodes > and the ASAs as "self-aware". I do not know what meaning is being > ascribed to that phrase. The usage does not seem to correspond to any > meaning I can understood. Can we just remove the sentence? (I suspect > that the intention is to lead to the fact that the functions can > advertise their capabilities, and negotiate them. We don't need the > sentence as grounding for that.) I think that the intent is to say that the ASA will have a model of itself. I think that it would be better to say that. -- ] Never tell me the odds! | ipv6 mesh networks [ ] Michael Richardson, Sandelman Software Works | network architect [ ] mcr@xxxxxxxxxxxx http://www.sandelman.ca/ | ruby on rails [ -- Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@xxxxxxxxxxxx>, Sandelman Software Works -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
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