Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-bfd-yang-13.txt> (YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)) to Proposed Standard

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The newly published -14 addresses these comments I made, below.

Tom Petch

> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "tom p." <daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> Sent: Saturday, May 26, 2018 12:19 PM
>
> > This I-D has a number of import statements from other YANG modules
for
> > which there is no Reference statement where I believe that there
> should
> > be, statements such as .
> >
> >   import iana-bfd-types
> >   import ietf-bfd
> >   import ietf-bfd-mpls
> >   import ietf-te
> >   import ietf-routing
> >
> > In the first three cases, it may be that the editors of this I-D
> > consider that such a reference is not needed because the relevant
> > modules are in the same I-D but such thinking is erroneous.  These
are
> > separate modules which will lead independent existences in the wild
so
> > that there will be nothing to tell a user of e.g.  module
> > ietf-bfd-mpls-te
> > where to look for
> > ietf-bfd-types, ietf-bfd,  ietf-bfd-mpls
> >
> > These need  reference statement such as
> >
> >   reference "RFC XXXX:   YANG Data Model for BFD";
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "The IESG" <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx>
> > To: "IETF-Announce" <ietf-announce@xxxxxxxx>
> > Cc: <rtg-bfd@xxxxxxxx>; <draft-ietf-bfd-yang@xxxxxxxx>;
> > <bfd-chairs@xxxxxxxx>
> > Sent: Friday, May 25, 2018 2:26 PM
> >
> > > The IESG has received a request from the Bidirectional Forwarding
> > Detection
> > > WG (bfd) to consider the following document: - 'YANG Data Model
for
> > > Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)'
> > >   <draft-ietf-bfd-yang-13.txt> as Proposed Standard
> > >
> > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and
> solicits
> > final
> > > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
> > > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2018-06-08. Exceptionally, comments
> may
> > be
> > > sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the
> > beginning of
> > > the Subject line to allow automated sorting.
> > >
> > > Abstract
> > >
> > >
> > >    This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
> > configure
> > >    and manage Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD).
> > >
> > >    The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network
> Management
> > >    Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > The file can be obtained via
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-yang/
> > >
> > > IESG discussion can be tracked via
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-yang/ballot/
> > >
> > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
> > >
> > > The document contains these normative downward references.
> > > See RFC 3967 for additional information:
> > >     draft-ietf-teas-yang-te: A YANG Data Model for Traffic
> Engineering
> > Tunnels and Interfaces (None - IETF stream)
> > >     draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang: A YANG Data Model for MPLS Base
> (None -
> > IETF stream)
>




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