Hi,
We just uploaded rev14 which (I believe) addresses your comments: we added the missing reference statements and also fixed an incorrect reference. The diffs also include some small tree diagram changes (I upgraded from pyang 1.7.3 to 1.7.5).
Regards,
Reshad.
On 2018-05-26, 11:10 AM, "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Tom,
Thanks for the review. I will add the missing reference statements, I believe this was just an oversight because there are/were no RFC numbers for these imported modules (there is now for ietf-routing). So I will add the usual RFC XXX with a note for the RFC Editor.
Regards,
Reshad.
On 2018-05-26, 7:31 AM, "tom p." <daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
This I-D has a number of import statements from other YANG modules for
which there is no Reference statement where I believe that there should
be, statements such as .
import iana-bfd-types
import ietf-bfd
import ietf-bfd-mpls
import ietf-te
import ietf-routing
In the first three cases, it may be that the editors of this I-D
consider that such a reference is not needed because the relevant
modules are in the same I-D but such thinking is erroneous. These are
separate modules which will lead independent existences in the wild so
that there will be nothing to tell a user of e.g. module
ietf-bfd-mpls-te
where to look for
ietf-bfd-types, ietf-bfd, ietf-bfd-mpls
These need reference statement such as
reference "RFC XXXX: YANG Data Model for BFD";
Tom Petch
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This draft is a work item of the Bidirectional Forwarding Detection WG of the IETF.
Title : YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)
Authors : Reshad Rahman
Lianshu Zheng
Mahesh Jethanandani
Santosh Pallagatti
Greg Mirsky
Filename : draft-ietf-bfd-yang-14.txt
Pages : 74
Date : 2018-06-01
Abstract:
This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
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