Re: Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20

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Hi Scott,

Thanks for your review.  Please see below.


On 10.04.18 15:03, Scott Bradner wrote:
> Reviewer: Scott Bradner
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> I did an OPS-DIR review of Manufacturer Usage Description Specification <
> draft-ietf-opsawg-mud > The specification is well written and clear (I also
> agree with Robert Spark's nits).
>
> One suggestion about document organization: I would either move the discussion
> of what should be done if the MUD controller can not retrieve the MUD file for
> some reason or another out of the security considerations section to after
> section 1.9 or at least include a forward pointer to the discussion.
>

I think this is a good point.  Section 1.6 ok with you?

Eliot




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