----- Original Message ----- From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@xxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Tuesday, March 27, 2018 10:30 AM > Hi Tom, > > Thank you very much for your detailed comments. > We've incorporated your comments into version-08. We also updated other referred drafts if they are also published in March :) Yan Yes, you have addressed my comments Tom Petch > Best Regards, > > Yan(on behalf of all authors) > > -----Original Message----- > From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Tuesday, March 27, 2018 12:32 AM > To: Zhuangyan (Yan) <zhuangyan.zhuang@xxxxxxxxxx>; ietf@xxxxxxxx > Cc: i2rs@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx; i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx; shares@xxxxxxxx; akatlas@xxxxxxxxx > Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > Yan > > It resolves my comments but... :-( > > there is a line length problem with that description clause " description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier defined in RFC 7348)s that the fabric has."; [not sure what e-mail will do with this but in the I-D, the line length is too long] > > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo is now RFC8345 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt is now RFC8346 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt is now RFC8344 > > the Copyright date is 2016 > > the URL to the licence information should be https not http (sigh) > > "Please replace the data in the revision statement with the data of publication when published."; /data/date/ 2 > > data model [6020][7950] > I would expect to see [RFC6020][RFC7950] > > uh huh > > I am not sure who the AD is now for this work so they probably need adding to the addressees of any further e-mail. > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@xxxxxxxxxx> > To: "tom p." <daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>; <ietf@xxxxxxxx> > Cc: <i2rs@xxxxxxxx>; > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx>; > <i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx>; <shares@xxxxxxxx>; <akatlas@xxxxxxxxx> > Sent: Monday, March 19, 2018 4:01 AM > > > Hi Tom, > > > > Thank you for your comments. > > We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and > added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well. > > > > We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you. > > > > Best Regards, > > > > Yan (on behalf of all authors) > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] > > Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM > > To: ietf@xxxxxxxx > > Cc: i2rs@xxxxxxxx; > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx; > i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx; shares@xxxxxxxx; akatlas@xxxxxxxxx > > Subject: Re: Last Call: > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > > > I see > > > > description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s > that the fabric has"; > > > > which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which > will not work as the YANG module must be plain text. > > > > I suggest an introductory section along the lines of > > > > This module imports ... > > from ... > > and references [RFC7348] > > > > along the lines of > > draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis > > without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference. > > > > Tom Petch > > > > ----- Original Message ----- > > From: "The IESG" <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> > > To: "IETF-Announce" <ietf-announce@xxxxxxxx> > > Cc: <i2rs@xxxxxxxx>; > > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx>; > > <i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx>; <shares@xxxxxxxx>; <akatlas@xxxxxxxxx> > > Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM > > Subject: Last Call: > > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data > Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > > > > > > > > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing > > System WG > > > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for > > Fabric > > > Topology in Data Center Networks' > > > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> as > Proposed > > > Standard > > > > > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and > solicits > > final > > > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > > > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments > may > > be > > > sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the > > beginning of > > > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > > > > > Abstract > > > > > > > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in > Data > > > Center Network. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > The file can be obtained via > > > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > > topology/ > > > > > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > > > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > > topology/ballot/ > > > > > > > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > > > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > > > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > > > rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A > > Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3 > Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream) > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >
