Yan: Thank you for the update. Sue Hares -----Original Message----- From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Zhuangyan (Yan) Sent: Sunday, March 18, 2018 11:02 PM To: tom p.; ietf@xxxxxxxx Cc: i2rs@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx; i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx; shares@xxxxxxxx; akatlas@xxxxxxxxx Subject: Re: [i2rs] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard Hi Tom, Thank you for your comments. We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well. We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you. Best Regards, Yan (on behalf of all authors) -----Original Message----- From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM To: ietf@xxxxxxxx Cc: i2rs@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx; i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx; shares@xxxxxxxx; akatlas@xxxxxxxxx Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard I see description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s that the fabric has"; which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which will not work as the YANG module must be plain text. I suggest an introductory section along the lines of This module imports ... from ... and references [RFC7348] along the lines of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "The IESG" <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> To: "IETF-Announce" <ietf-announce@xxxxxxxx> Cc: <i2rs@xxxxxxxx>; <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@xxxxxxxx>; <i2rs-chairs@xxxxxxxx>; <shares@xxxxxxxx>; <akatlas@xxxxxxxxx> Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing System WG > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Fabric > Topology in Data Center Networks' > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> as Proposed > Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data > Center Network. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- topology/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- topology/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3 Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream) > > > _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
