Re: Genart last call review of draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@xxxxxxxxx> · Wed, 20 Sep 2017 15:26:14 +0100



    Thanks for doing the update.
    - Stewart

    
    On 20/09/2017 15:00, Dave Cridland
      wrote:

    
        shakespeare.example is a fine domain to use - the XMPP
          community (mostly due to Peter Saint-Andre) has used these
          inventive domains to express examples with more clarity -
          montague.lit, capulet.lit, and so on provide usefully
          recognisable domains. But .example is just as good as .lit,
          and just as clear.

          
            On 20 Sep 2017 14:39, "Steve Kille"
              <steve.kille@xxxxxxxxx>
              wrote:

              Stewart,

                
                These Shakespearean style addresses are conventionally
                used in XMPP XEPs, and I followed that style here.

                
                I've discussed with XMPP colleagues, and we agree that
                although the convention is cool, you are right that a
                safe address should be used.

                
                I have fixed this in 06, which I just submitted

                
                Regards

                
                  Steve

                
                  > -----Original Message-----

                  > From: Stewart Bryant [mailto:stewart.bryant@gmail.com]

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                  > Subject: Genart last call review of
                  draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

                  >

                  > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant

                  > Review result: Ready with Nits

                  >

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                  > Document: draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05

                  > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant

                  > Review Date: 2017-09-20

                  > IETF LC End Date: 2017-09-27

                  > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

                  >

                  > Summary: A well written document, however it uses
                  an example email

                  > address that might be allocated in the future,
                  rather than one for the

                  > example range.

                  >

                  > Major issues: None

                  >

                  > Minor issues:

                  >

                  > "romeo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx representing a user) "

                  >

                  > That is a really cool example! However I can
                  imagine .lit eventually being

                  > allocated so we ought to use one of the RFC6761
                  example TLDs.

                  >

                  > Nits/editorial comments:  None

                  >