Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kille-ldap-xmpp-schema-05 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2017-09-20 IETF LC End Date: 2017-09-27 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: A well written document, however it uses an example email address that might be allocated in the future, rather than one for the example range. Major issues: None Minor issues: "romeo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx representing a user) " That is a really cool example! However I can imagine .lit eventually being allocated so we ought to use one of the RFC6761 example TLDs. Nits/editorial comments: None