Hi Elwyn,
-04 has
Some of this will be the TED as is normal for a PCE and can be
collected using the mechanisms already in place (such as listening to
the IGPs, using BGP-LS [RFC7752], or northbound export of YANG-
encoded data [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo]).
-05 has
Some of this will be the TED as is normal for a PCE and can be
collected using the mechanisms already in place (such as listening to
the IGPs, using BGP-LS [RFC7752], or northbound export of YANG-
encoded data [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo] from the network elements
to the controller).
I think that probably gives enough context.
Yes, thanks for the typo in 2.1.2. I'll save it for Auth48.
A
From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elwynd@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: 04 September 2017 14:46
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Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
- I don't see an explanation of northbound in -05.
- In the new text at the end of s2.1.2 s/whole the controllers/while the controllers/
Otherwise, the extra text and changes look helpful.
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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: 04/09/2017 10:47 (GMT+00:00)
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Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
Thanks Elwyn,
Clarified in the next revision.
Adrian
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> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
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> Review Date: 2017-08-28
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24
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> Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03. The new version
> is ready with one introduced nit. Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat
> overlong.
>
> Nit:
> s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs
> brief explanation.
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