>> What is important, for going forward, is to talk about going forward. >> What tends to be distracting is criticism of well-intended previous work. >> >> Consequently, I suggest avoiding vocabulary like 'mistake'. >> >> Rather, something like: >> >> In such cases, the experience can serve to motivate changing to a >> lower bar for registration. > > Yes, that's much better. I agree. Done. Will post a new version tout de suite. Barry