On 11/11/2014 09:17, Dave Crocker wrote: > On 11/10/2014 12:10 PM, Barry Leiba wrote: >> Brian, that's a good point. I changed that text to address Paul >> Kyzivat's comments, and I may have been too strong in that. I could: >> >> 1. Change it to "It may have been a mistake". >> >> 2. Remove that last sentence entirely. >> >> 3. Replace the sentence with something else that I'm happy to have you suggest. > > > What is important, for going forward, is to talk about going forward. > What tends to be distracting is criticism of well-intended previous work. > > Consequently, I suggest avoiding vocabulary like 'mistake'. > > Rather, something like: > > In such cases, the experience can serve to motivate changing to a > lower bar for registration. Yes, that's much better. Brian > > would be more helpful. > > d/ >