Re: [weirds] Last Call: <draft-ietf-weirds-using-http-13.txt> (HTTP usage in the Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP)) to Proposed Standard

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A few comments, mostly nits:

Comment 1
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Section 1.

##    The registration data expected to be presented by this service is
##    Internet resource registration data - registration of domain names
##    and Internet number resources.  These data is typically provided by

Nit: ''These data is'':
Perhaps - remove the ‘’The'' to start the paragraph and then ''Such data
are''
for the Nit. (Treat ‘’data'' consistently as singular or plural.)


Comment 2
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Section 3.

Nit: ''meant to return only one path of execution'' - perhaps ''follow one
path''?



Comment 3
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Section 5.6.


Nit: ''As the use of RDAP is for public resources'' is a judgement call.
Suggest
rewording as ''When RDAP is for public resources, a value of ‘*’. . .''

Comment 4
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Section 6.


Slight discomfort: I suppose this is not internationalizable given the
nature
of the programming tools being ASCII-based.  So no formal objection, but a
desire to allow identifiers to be able to break out of a ASCII-only set
''is
a pony I'd like to have.''

No suggested change, but curious ... if ...


Comment 5
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Section 7.

Nit: ''It does require the RDAP clients MUST support HTTPS.''
Nit: ''This document made'' should be ''This document makes''



Comment 6
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Section 8.1

Addition to third paragraph:

Suggestion: ''For documentation in other than the RFC series, IANA is
requested
to hold in escrow copies of the documentation.'' (This was needed for a DNS
RR type defined in an ATM Forum document.)

Comment 7

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Appendix B

Nit: ''this is unlikely to have any known side effects'' - suggest ''this
will be[/ought to be] compatible with the RDAP definition.''



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