Hi Peter, I'm fine with all of your suggestion. Thanks for the review. Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e3e3@xxxxxxxxx On Fri, Apr 25, 2014 at 1:30 AM, Peter Yee <peter@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you > may receive. > > Document: draft-eastlake-iana-cfm-considerations-01 > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review Date: April-24-2014 > IETF LC End Date: May-21-2014 > IESG Telechat date: TBD > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current > Practice, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready > with nits.] > > This document provides the IANA Considerations for two registries covering > the IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011 CFM OpCode and TLV Type blocks assigned to the > IETF. > > Nits: > > Most comments that follow are for alignment with the terminology and usage > found in IEEE Std 802.1Q-2011. > > General: globally replace "Continuity" with "Connectivity". > > General: globally replace "Codepoints" with "Code Points". > > General: globally replace "Op-Code" with "OpCode". > > Page 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "IANA Consideration" to "IANA > Considerations". > > Page 5, 1st paragraph: end the reference with a period. > > Page 5, 2nd paragraph: replace "Mansfield, S." with "and S. Mansfield" to > match http://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-ref.txt. Hey, I'm running out > of nits to pick here. :-) > > -Peter Yee > >